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DreamRomancer
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0 posted 2001-10-11 02:13 PM


Upon it's wings an angel doth soar,
Within the clouds forever more,
A loved one returned to heaven above,
Going to receive peace and eternal love,
They shall watch over us all,
Trying to make sure we never fall,
Guidance and love are lessons they teach,
God's love we wish to reach,
At the end of life death takes it seat,
A new angel thus the cycle repeat

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

© Copyright 2001 Jeffrey McMillion - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-11 02:19 PM



What a beautiful rendition of one's passing...leaving behind the best of all thoughts and teachings...

Wonderful!

Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-11 07:52 PM


and thus. . . it shall always be. . .

well done. . . much said in a small space. . .

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Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
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3 posted 2001-10-11 10:05 PM


Touchingly beautiful
Where in Ohio are you from? I'm in Ohio too...... :-)
Heather (CherokeeGirl)


Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.


[This message has been edited by Heather Miller (edited 10-11-2001).]

DreamRomancer
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since 2001-09-18
Posts 46
Ohio, United States
4 posted 2001-10-12 12:01 PM


Thank you for your encouraging responses.  I have come to enjoy posting my works here.
Thank you all!

I am located outside Cincinnati, OH...a little town called Mt Orab!

Where are you in Ohio?

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

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