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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-10-11 01:21 PM


I open my eyes
and see you smiling
like you've been waiting
all night for
just this

I close my eyes again
and lean in closer
enjoying the moment
just before
we kiss

Immersed in you
I wish for just
one thing
that every morning
be like this

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-10-11 01:22 PM


Krista, this is lovely  
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2001-10-11 01:29 PM


May your wish come true.
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3 posted 2001-10-11 02:30 PM


*sigh* ... what a way to start the day.
sunrise surprise  
sweet sincerety in ever word Krista
well done
jm

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4 posted 2001-10-11 02:50 PM


Nice work!  

Sea Watcher

Larry C
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5 posted 2001-10-11 03:10 PM


SmittenKitten,
It doesn't get any better than this.  Perfect.  Something we can all wish for.

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6 posted 2001-10-11 03:59 PM


ditto ~ life gets absolutely NO better than that, and you said it well.  

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

jonmcm
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7 posted 2001-10-11 05:15 PM


Well I wish my waking up was like this!

A lovely poem SmittenKitten.

Jon  

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8 posted 2001-10-11 07:37 PM


mornings are made for this. . .  

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
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9 posted 2001-10-11 07:58 PM


Oh yeah, do I know this!  Nicely done, SK...great write...I really enjoyed this!

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Sinister Handed
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10 posted 2001-10-11 09:06 PM


quote:
like you've been waiting
all night for
just this


Darn, you're on to me.

There is no better way
to wake up as far as I
am concerned. Love this poem.

As well as you!  

cottage
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11 posted 2001-10-11 09:18 PM


you've made my morning, love this !
Balladeer
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12 posted 2001-10-11 09:47 PM


There are moments so perfect we find ourselves hoping they never change....as you expressed so beautifully here..
SmittenKitten
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13 posted 2001-10-12 12:32 PM


Susan~ thank you    it's great to hear such things from a romantic such as yourself! *hugs*

Midnitesun~ aww, thanks    *hugs*

JM~ "sunrise surprise" I like that   thanks as always for the sweet replies.  I always look forward to seeing your name   *hugs*

SeaWatcher~ Thank you!    Welcome to Passions!

Larry~ no, it doesn't does it?   thanks for the read and comments!

Sharon~ well I am truly blessed to have experienced such mornings   thanks for stopping in! *hugs*

Jon~ why thank you!   It's very nice to meet you    and hang in there, you'll get your chance too!  

Sven~   exactly!    thanks for reading and giving your two cents!  

snowpants~ Good to hear!    it's such a wonderful feeling...one I could never describe perfectly!  Thanks for the sweet comments   *hugs*

SH~ Your eyes always give you away   there is no better way as far as I'm concerned either.  So when are you going to come be with me so that every morning *is* like this?    Love you  

cottage~awww, what a compliment    thank you!

Balladeer~ So so true...thanks for stopping in

Hugs to all of you!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

rwood
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14 posted 2001-10-12 07:13 AM


A perfect beginning to a perfect day! Wonderful!


Sincerely,
Regina

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
15 posted 2001-10-12 11:11 AM



Regina~ I'm glad I could give you a smile this morning     You gave me one!

Hugs,
~Krista


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too


[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-12-2001).]

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