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.........Will Never Be...........
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.........Will Never Be........... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Thoughts of the night that will never be spent alone just you and me heart to heart held in bliss from magical time stopping kiss caressing touch from your fingertips dancing ‘round curve of hips looking deep into your eyes as you easily hypnotize giving myself heart, body and mind as you give in like kind passion’s heat untold love lavished uncontrolled wanting ,needing ours soul’s mesh far beyond blend of flesh escaping a moment from reality understanding thoughtfully this night, I know that will never be ~SEA~ "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
AMAZING! 1derful! FABULOUS! BRAVA! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, But it is in your dreams. Enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bono, Muey Bueno, and I can't think of anything else to say.....GREEEEEAAATTTT. I like the way you do this. So much love within. May your dream become a reality. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Susan~ Your regret and longing come through quite vividly with this. Beautifully expressed sweet poetess...sounds like you've been daydreaming of past loves a lot lately!  Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely YES. Beautiful words. But never say never, for that's when it will no doubt be. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, Quite beautiful, longing and sad. I know this feeling well. (((hugs))) sweet friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Only in your heart... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely, touching piece from your pen. Beautifully and wistfully written If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan, I love this...of course you already know that. You sound so sad....perhaps it will be one day. Hugs to you sweetie. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Those thoughts are so real. I know how you must feel. Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, You write love like no one else!! Beautiful hon, simply beautiful! Gosh I love reading your work. I've missed it and you. Its so good to be home  Take care. Amy "I could kiss you in |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA, we have nights like that all the time in Florida....come see  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Sea..your poem is passionate and well-written...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ thank you dear heart Seymour~ thank you kind poet Magnus~ goodness, thank you  Krista~ sort of, just kinda reviewing old tuggings in my heart thank you Midnitesun~ na, and that's ok thank you Michael~ yes, and you express your feelings beautifully in your poetry thank you (((hugs)))LIW~ yes, only thanks Tracey~ thank you Nancy~ no, I'm really not sad at all...just keeping it where it belongs....in dreams thanks Heather~ thank you Amy~ you sweet girl, thank you I'm happy you are home too! Balladeer~ *sigh* I bet the nights are hot there still.....  Nate~ thank you ~SEA "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Grrrrr.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sea, I have felt and understand this sense of longing that you have penned so well. Take heart dear one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Susan, I know dreams like this...so real you can see his face clearly enough that you reach out to touch it. Sigh...yeah I know those dreams. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I absolutely love this one  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know this feeling, very well. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I can feel it too yuh |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is great, SEA! I, too, have found myself recently thinking about loves that could have been but never were. Ah, the what-ifs could drive a person insane. Wonderful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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