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Rain '1825'

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 10-11-2001 12:14 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

In your eyes,
stars reveal
their reflection
of heaven
Waves upon the
ocean dance
in rapture of
your voice
Your words like rain
among my soul fall,
caressing my humble heart
I have felt the
white horses
spirit run freely,
watching their gallop
of changing times
creating my loneliness
again for you
somewhere among the dawn,
somewhere among the wind,
I feel your essence,
my need slowly, gently,
crying from eyes of
calming green,  
your name describes
my poetic lips
still my soul
touches the rain

I remember


~1825 and still counting~




If you lose your way think back on yesterday, remember me this way...believe

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 10-11-2001 12:18 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Lauren, This is just so beautiful!  
It reads so gently and tugs at the heart.  Lovely indeed.  
~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 10-11-2001 12:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Your muse came home....good!  And so is this!
sigheyes
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the winds of destiny


3 posted 10-11-2001 01:07 PM       View Profile for sigheyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sigheyes

It is a wonderful read Greeneyes!  Beautiful.  *smile*
SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet


4 posted 10-11-2001 01:23 PM       View Profile for SmittenKitten   Email SmittenKitten   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmittenKitten's Home Page   View IP for SmittenKitten


Greeneyes~ *sigh* this is beautiful...floats gently off the page and settles quietly on my soul.

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Janet Marie
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5 posted 10-11-2001 01:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Your words like rain
among my soul fall,
caressing my humble heart
I have felt the
white horses
spirit run freely,
watching their gallop
of changing times
creating my loneliness
again for you
somewhere among the dawn,
somewhere among the wind,

I feel your essence,
my need slowly, gently,
crying from eyes of
calming green,  
your name describes
my poetic lips
still my soul
touches the rain

===============================

Oh my ... oh Lauren ...
oh how I needed this today...
oh how I wish I had wrote this *S*
taking this one for my own...
your green eyes always reflect my brown...
and my heart's need to reflect his emerald eyes....
and with tears in mine...I thank you for that.
jm





Here I stand like it matters...
once love is through-it gets scattered by the rain
and pain gives me the right to be unkind ...

Magnus
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6 posted 10-11-2001 02:07 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

wow, oh wow.......
This is simply super....I love the intensity
of the words of love.  Such strength and
desire.   Great poem....Gee,  I could go on
forever and ever about this one.
Auguste
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By the sea


7 posted 10-11-2001 02:54 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Lauren,

I don't know how much more lovely your writing can get than this.  I would like to see this one posted at our workshop.  (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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just out of reach


8 posted 10-11-2001 04:09 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

This is just awesome. I love it. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 10-11-2001 04:31 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This slid down the page with such ease and beauty Lauren, and I think one of your very best, be proud for it is a beauty.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

JamesMichael
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10 posted 10-11-2001 04:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice Greeneyes.....James
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Gaia


11 posted 10-11-2001 04:43 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Greeneyes, this is absolutely wonderful. I will save this one in my library. And Janet Marie, those graphix are fantastic.
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12 posted 10-11-2001 07:40 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

simply beatiful Lauren. . .

a work of shimmering hearts and soulful delight. . . excellent. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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13 posted 10-11-2001 07:58 PM       View Profile for The Lady of Shallot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Lady of Shallot's Home Page   View IP for The Lady of Shallot

to remember can mean the difference between light and day to a soul.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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14 posted 10-11-2001 08:25 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Tis beautiful sweet Lady Lauren.  Your words capture what is in your heart and cradle it so tenderly.  Wonderful write Dear Friend.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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15 posted 10-11-2001 11:39 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

forgot to click library box last time  

When your own emptiness is all that's getting through
There comes a point when you're not sure why you're still talking
I passed that point long ago

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16 posted 10-11-2001 11:54 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Enchantress~ I am thankful you have stopped in to read my humble words....your words are more then kind...  

Sunshine~  Indeed and I am the lucky one....thanks my friend...  

sigheyes~  thank you for taking your time to read...I appreciate that...  


SmittenKitten~ as does your response, thank you...  


Janet Marie~   dear poet friend, if I can reflect your heart then I am the lucky one....and always know I know....my heartfelt tip pen to yours....

Magnus~ I am so taken by your words, thank you so much....  


Michael~ your friendship touches me so, thank you dear friend for your lovely words, and kind heart....  


Nightshade~ awesome is great!! thank you...I appreciate you taking your time to read...  


Mysteria~   my friend, from one poet to another....indeed lucky to have found this place!      


JamesMichael~ thank you kind sir....  


Midnitesun~ thank you, I appreciate you coming by to read, and hopefully enjoying...and I agree with you, JM does find the best graphics....    


Sven~ my friend, you say the most delightful words, to touch anyone....thank you....  


The Lady of Shallot~ indeed it can, and my soul has seen both....powerful words, thank you...  


Gentle Spirit~ thank you dear friend....always....


Peace and love to you all....


Greeneyes~


***















I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-11-2001).]

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17 posted 10-13-2001 01:18 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I found your words very soothing and therapeutic...a remarkable write!

Nathan

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highways, & byways, for now


18 posted 10-13-2001 09:17 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Greeneyes - this is most tender, and a very beautiful expression of your words.

BC
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19 posted 10-13-2001 12:23 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Nate Dogg~

I am humbled by your reply, thank you...  


Bill C~

Thank you for letting me know you were here, your comment is much appreciated...  


Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-13-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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Am I impressed???  WELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!  I am so glad that I ran across this one in the back pages.  I always enjoy reading your works but this one really shows your growth and grabs at the heart of the poet.  Beautifully written.
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21 posted 10-18-2001 07:06 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

A beautiful poem it is. Thank you for sharing it.
Greeneyes
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22 posted 10-18-2001 11:37 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Mark~

Wow well hello stranger, and thank you for such a kind compliment!! good to 'see' you


Smartchick~ thanks for stopping by to read, its appreciated!


**********
  & Peace to all


Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-18-2001).]

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Deep in the heart


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1derful write indeed.  I love the finale!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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24 posted 10-19-2001 11:44 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

Green, a nice write yuh
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