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SEA
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0 posted 2001-10-11 10:25 AM



I feel the clouds
Go passing by
Feel them shift
Hear them sigh
Heavy , thick
Slow to proceed
I notice
And take heed
Dark and foreboding
With premonition form
Displaying signs
Of impending storm
Almost there
Almost here
Not quite afraid
It’s not quite fear
Hushed awe
I do maintain
Waiting, watching
For the rain


~SEA~

"One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you
can't utter". ~James Earl Jones

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1 posted 2001-10-11 10:31 AM


Don't be standing out there if you get lightning - but short of that - enjoy some spuddlin'... Nice job, Susan..
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2 posted 2001-10-11 10:44 AM



A ponderous weight, these clouds of yours....well done!

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3 posted 2001-10-11 11:11 AM


Storms have a way of affecting moods...I enjoyed this read...I can see the clouds in
my mind now.

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4 posted 2001-10-11 11:13 AM


love the rain also...ours will come in a day or two..*s

~Wynter

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...Pope John Paul II



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5 posted 2001-10-11 12:08 PM


Lovely Sea.  it's raining here and quite cool and damp.  (of course it's damp Nancy...it's raining, duh!)lol.  
Me thinks it makes for good writing weather.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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6 posted 2001-10-11 12:37 PM


rain falls on our SEA
lightly caressing, soothing
calming all her fears

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2001-10-11 03:14 PM


Susan,

You need to move to Seattle, where it rains all the time.   LOL!  Great work! (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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8 posted 2001-10-11 03:19 PM


Nan~ I'll be careful   LOL thanks  

Sunshine~   thank you  

Magnus~ I love the rain, glad you could see my storm clouds   thank you  

Wynter~ thank you  

Nancy~ the rain is healing   gotta love it   thanks  

Interloper~ wish me pitter patter, drip drops   thank you  

Michael~ I'd love it there I'm sure! So soothing....   thank you   (((HUGS)))


~SEA

"One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you
can't utter". ~James Earl Jones

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9 posted 2001-10-11 03:27 PM


SEA,
It's nice to see an appreciation for the rain.  Especially when it's understood.  Nice job.

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10 posted 2001-10-11 03:52 PM


Super...SEA. Nothing like rain in the offing. Excellent. Bob
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11 posted 2001-10-11 04:07 PM


I love to hear rain patter my
window.
Great poem!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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