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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-10-11 08:24 AM


All Perfectly true

The trees and stars
All perfectly true
The grass I walk
Neath sky of blue

Flowers in bloom
As petals unfold
Sat by the ocean
Neath sunset gold

Waterfall cascade
Streams that flow
Colours to view
Neath a rainbow

Fragile butterflies
Birds sing for me
Beauty to realise
Neath all sincerity

Nurturing insights
Gives me reasons
Eyes open to see
Neath all seasons


Hope © 2001

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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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1 posted 2001-10-11 09:24 AM


Fragile butterflies
Birds sing for me
Beauty to realise
Neath all sincerity

Nurturing insights
Gives me reasons
Eyes open to see
Neath all seasons
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A very delightful poem to read. Lovely and peaceful.


Deb  


Sinister Handed
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 58

2 posted 2001-10-12 01:28 AM


Excellent poem.
Tranquil, yet so full of life at the same time.

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-10-12 01:31 AM



This is lovely...it trickles off the tongue  

Hugs,
~Krista  


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-12-2001).]

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-10-12 01:41 AM


This is very beautiful....brilliant write!

Nathan

cottage
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 138

5 posted 2001-10-12 01:54 AM


this is such a lovely poem !  

cottage

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-10-12 04:45 AM


Very nice...James
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2001-10-12 04:54 AM


Blooming Rose , I am so pleased you enjoyed
reading my words , your response  is appreciated
Hope

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Hey thanks sinister , yes tranquil and full of life
quite the mixture as my mind
paints the picture  
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
8 posted 2001-10-12 04:57 AM


Thanks Krista for your response, I am pleased
you enjoyed the flow of the poem
Hope

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Hi Nate , thanks for your kind comments
much appreciated
Hope

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