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LoveLetters
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 35
State of Hope

0 posted 2001-10-11 02:17 AM

There is the need of you settling on my chest.
Its as if some great pain of doubt tortures me in erratic detail.
I am living just to know your voice
and I am longing for your hand to hold.
Desperate just to know you
I reach out in my dreams and throw open my gates for you.
I want to walk with you as if we'd walked before
two passionate spirits under one darkned lover's sky.
Kiss in kiss deserves a slow beating song.
This isn't a painful ache
but a slow soft insistent gaze of an ache
striking the chords of my heart
making me shiver with each movement.
I want to walk with you
and love you hand in hand.
One last breath before I leave this dream.
One last moment before your face fades.
I love you.
Could it be more delicious than that?

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-10-11 06:12 AM

I want to walk with you
and love you hand in hand. ..the romantic in us..I love this and several other lines..they speak softly to me. *s

~Wynter..I think I am inspired...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-10-11 08:23 AM

This isn't a painful ache
but a slow soft insistent gaze of an ache
striking the chords of my heart
making me shiver with each movement.
I want to walk with you
and love you hand in hand.
One last breath before I leave this dream.
One last moment before your face fades.
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very very cool...
love the intensity and devotion of this.
Welcome to Poetry Land LL
so nice to have you here with us.

Here I stand like it matters...
once love is through-it gets scattered by the rain
and pain gives me the right to be unkind ...

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

3 posted 2001-10-11 06:08 PM

beautiful, touching
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-10-11 06:17 PM

"Could it be more delicious then that?"
I think not...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-11 06:52 PM

I agree with James....this is truly delicious! Enjoyed much. ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-10-11 07:14 PM

this is such a longing romantic write...very much enjoyed...helen

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-10-11 07:23 PM

This isn't a painful ache
but a slow soft insistent gaze of an ache
striking the chords of my heart
making me shiver with each movement.
I want to walk with you
and love you hand in hand.

God, do I know this feeling. Well done.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-10-11 07:32 PM

wow. . . this is indeed a full and deep longing. . . powerful. . .

very well done. . .

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