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Open Poetry #16

Turtle Doves Minuet

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-10 09:52 PM

Turtle Dove Minuet
By: Noah Eaton
10/10/01

Wend softly in the air, satin angel of my skies
You're dear as the apple in Aphrodites' eye
To grace is where we will kedge
Just dream on, sweet love, in my arms you'll always rest

Your rosy cheeks make the robins simper
I worship the stars that your soft eyes whimper
Your wings paint the precursor to every sunny day
Bayadere of the skies, dance in my heart's ballet

Let's drink from this rose of plighted love
Sweet ladylove, you are the darling I've been always dreaming of
Smitten together in the nectar of bona fide
You'll always wind round my heart, for all time

May the turtle doves fly from the gardens within
Dearly beloved I am to you, I share you my devotion
You and I are two butterflies, fluttering forever in amour
Singing heart's cadenza, echoing as our spirits soar...

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-10-10 10:22 PM

Noah~ This is beautiful...I can't pick out a favourite line! Loved the rhyme and flow and the romantic images you've incorporated.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-10 10:46 PM

This is so lovingly tender. Beautiful words

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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