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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-10-10 09:12 PM


of over half a century, seems My life, though short.
I have encountered and experienced so much.
I have endured hardships, heartaches and pain.
I have experienced much happiness, much joy.

My life, without you is meaningless.
Without you, a hollow shell with no meaning.
Without you, an experience I care not do have.
For, with you, I have all things, I need nothing.

You love me, you have endured much with me.
As part of my soul, you have felt the same feelings.
As part of my mind, you have known my wants.
As part of my heart, you have received all I have.

I sometimes say and often think how I care.
I sometimes want to remind you, you are dear.
I always feel those feelings, I keep them here.
My heart holds you within it’s bounds forever.

You give me all of yourself, unselfishly.
You ask nothing in return but love.
This I give unequivocally, freely.
You are me, we are each other....forever.  

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-10 09:17 PM


Your words are wonderful and sincerely heartfelt... Welcome to Passions, Magnus - This is a pretty wonderful place as well - Settle in and make yourself comfy...

Check your email for a special greeting..

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2 posted 2001-10-10 09:18 PM


Welcome to :p  I enjoyed this very  much    
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3 posted 2001-10-10 09:19 PM


Thanx Nan,,,,,this seems to be a very friendly forum....I am enjoying the browse
and the kind words....thank you.

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4 posted 2001-10-10 09:22 PM


Jeffrey.....thank you for the comments...It
is a pleasure being here at this site...a warm reception means much.

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5 posted 2001-10-10 09:33 PM



You've only begun to see a "warm" reception...sit back, write more, and you'll make a passel of friends...

You've only just begun!

Magnus
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6 posted 2001-10-10 09:41 PM


Thank you.......very much....I am enjoying the post comments as well as the reads of other poems....this is a nice site.
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7 posted 2001-10-10 09:43 PM


Welcome Magnus! What a wonderful sharing of love and devotion. I can't tell you how much I adore the outpour of such verse. I hope you find our pages comfy!

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2001-10-10 09:46 PM


Welcome to Passions Magnus!  Beautiful sentiments, filled with devotion and sincerity, much enjoyed your lovely first post ... I hope to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2001-10-10 09:47 PM


Thanx, Regina this is a very warm site...the
reception is exceptional....I am enjoying this.  And the poetry is quite good as well.

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10 posted 2001-10-10 09:49 PM


What a wonderful love poem! Welcome to the most loving site on the net.
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11 posted 2001-10-10 09:50 PM


Thanx Kit.....I have enjoyed the comments, from yourself.  from others.  a warm reception.
I am enjoying all of the poetry here.  A very
nice site to post and read at.

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12 posted 2001-10-10 09:52 PM


Midnitesun,  a perfect name for romance....
Thank you for your wonderful words....
this is a wonderful site...

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13 posted 2001-10-10 09:59 PM



Welcome to Passions!

A lovely first piece   It's always nice to read of true love!  

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Magnus
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14 posted 2001-10-10 10:16 PM


Thanx SmittenK.....
I am enjoying the site, the poetry and all of
the wonderful comments..

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15 posted 2001-10-10 11:03 PM


Great first post Magnus!
Looking forward to more from you.
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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wonderful first post!!   Welcome  
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17 posted 2001-10-10 11:12 PM


You love me, you have endured much with me.
As part of my soul, you have felt the same feelings.
As part of my mind, you have known my wants.
As part of my heart, you have received all I have.
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Well it doesnt get much better than this  
Welcome to Poetry Land ...
you make a wondeerful poetic entrance with this verse of promise and devotion.
Its so nice to meet you.
jm

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18 posted 2001-10-11 02:11 PM


Thank you JM...quite nice meeting you and
many of the other poets....

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