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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-10-10 09:07 PM



Not knowing what to do, not knowing what to say
I turn to you and the pain goes away
You make me laugh and smile and let me be myself for awhile
I don't know how to thank you or even what to say
I just know that I don't ever want you to go away

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1 posted 2001-10-10 09:40 PM


and that's when we know. . .

hello Laura. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-10 09:46 PM


What a nice poem. And it sounds like...love?
ParisGrl
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3 posted 2001-10-11 01:30 PM


John,

Hello, how are you?  who knows what could happen.

Midnitesun,

Its not love......but could be one day.  who knows.

Thanks for reading!

~Laura~

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4 posted 2001-10-11 03:28 PM



This is charming...

ParisGrl
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5 posted 2001-10-11 03:38 PM


Sunshine,

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

~Laura~

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6 posted 2001-10-12 10:50 AM


Laura,

Be it friendship or love...I wish you nothing
but the best. I hope that you will be very happy.

Take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

ParisGrl
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7 posted 2001-10-15 04:34 PM


Amy,

And I wish the same for you.  :-)

~Laura~

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