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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
Posts 117


0 posted 2001-10-10 03:58 PM



The furrows in my brow indicate history
The glint in my sea blue eyes cast spells of mystery
The edges of my mouth reach for the sky
The strong shoulders I have
-there for you when you cry

Two strong arms to hold tightly in the night
Too big a chest to protect you from a fright
Lumberjack icon 'tis me
For you I'd fell any tree

Eyes for one and only
always there when your upset or lonely
Warm soft hands that scoop you up, spin you round
Smile as entwined we fall to the ground
Soft landings, as if a dove
wont fall hard, just fall in love

Richy

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
1 posted 2001-10-10 04:43 PM


I think I'm in love  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-10-10 06:48 PM


Lovely...


~Tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-10 06:54 PM


Eyes for one and only
always there when your upset or lonely
Warm soft hands that scoop you up, spin you round
Smile as entwined we fall to the ground
Soft landings, as if a dove
wont fall hard, just fall in love
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Oh Richy!!  Oh me...oh my....oh sigh!
Lovely...VERY!!
~hugs, NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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