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Open Poetry #16

woe is me

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-10-10 01:57 PM

If dreams are ever real
just close your eyes and feel
With love we will win the day
and blow the clouds of sorrow away

I cant repair this mess I caused
only human I am you see
but remember in your sleep my love
there is a memory of me

So wonderful we met
an amazing woman you be
One I have touched so deep
in the way that you touched me

With guardian stars to guide me
and fate right in my hands
I'll always be incomplete
half my heart lies in your land

I wont ever get this back
I'll die a long slow death
and your name I will whisper
with my final mortal breath......

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-10 01:58 PM

Ah, the ladies will all be here to read this, cry a little, and say quietly...thank you!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-10-10 06:32 PM

This is indeed beautiful...

~Tier

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-10 06:45 PM

Richard, this is lovely. Thank you for sharing. Romantic too!

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-10 10:03 PM

I'll always be incomplete
half my heart lies in your land

Reading this, just made me think "so go back over there and join the other half of your heart". However, as one who long ago left half her heart in your country, I know it's not always possible. If it is though, I hope you get your chance.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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