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vandana
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0 posted 2001-10-10 11:36 AM



Another brand new day comes along,
Listening to our song,
Now When I listen to the words,
Looking back
when we're meant to be,
The love was different that time,
love was real,
now the day has changed into it's time
and between love and time
when it all that makes it's
own difference,
Don't you see?
the love we shared was different,
even now the love we are holding to,
It's makes a differnce In us too,
The blue skies,
where a love lies in its heaven,
The songs that we sung,
The love that makes everythings
It's own difference,
The diference
changes its every way
of it's own time
The flowers that bloom
And the weather has it's own difference,
So we're here
to make difference in our life.
let's make a difference in changes too,
The difference in you and me,
The differnce in everything
that we make,
The hearts that takes our breathe away,
The difference.......

This is my new poem I just wrote it in only five minutes.Hope you all will like it.

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-10-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-10 11:38 AM


Vandana, it's wonderful!   very nice  
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2 posted 2001-10-10 12:02 PM


1derful!

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3 posted 2001-10-10 12:13 PM


It proves that love can make a big difference in less than five minutes. And it also proves that all of us are no different in what we search for on earth.
Thanks for sharing.

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4 posted 2001-10-10 05:25 PM



Vandana, I know how hard it is to express yourself in only five minutes, but when it's the right one, then there IS the difference! Thank you for sharing this!

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5 posted 2001-10-10 07:37 PM


a new record my friend. . . just shows that when the feeling comes. . . you have to go with it. . .

great job. . .  

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6 posted 2001-10-10 08:14 PM


Beautiful thoughts, Vandana!
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