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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212
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Carve Remember the trees tall maple daystar leaves rising cresting new against the blue pale measureless sky Child eyes recall with glee the moments seemed as hours So today I plead with mercy innocence regained and burning Brothers Sisters Lovers take the step leaping free unchain the scores written long ago Carve your passion's mystery press your mark light the way Spill tears of joy unrelenting raise your feet above the stones and stumble no more Willie B 2001© [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 10-10-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
very nice. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and stumble no more.... Excellent! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes...I remember well! And so much you have brought to my memory in this verse. So very lovely and reaching. No limits. No fears. Wonderful! Sincerely, Regina |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is truly beautiful Willie Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Thanks to one and all! I appreciate you taking a look at "Carve" Willie B |
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