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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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0 posted 2001-10-10 07:58 AM



Failure
decorated my bedroom wall
Red paint
Red pastels
Red markers
my bare hands
It had been written
before
But the paint wore off
With my brush
I restored it
In despair
I acknowledge
my artistry

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The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
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1 posted 2001-10-10 09:16 AM


Eunice, we all would like to paint in red at times, I have  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-10-10 12:22 PM


With my brush
I restored it
In despair
I acknowledge
my artistry

Incredible!  Though, a sadder part two.

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