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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2001-10-10 12:19 PM

Like days unnoticed

we forget about the night

and the birds fly south





©  07.20.00

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

1 posted 2001-10-10 09:18 AM

Yes, and no day should go unnoticed. Thank you for a wonderful senryu

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-10-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-22 06:14 PM

this was lovely...another one I missed *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-22 06:45 PM

birds migration ends
settled in for the winter
waiting for the spring

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-22 08:23 PM

Sometimes our nights are as important as our days and yet it is easier to forget the nights. At least that is what I felt when reading this poem. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-10-22 08:30 PM

(sigh) Days and nights alike should never be forgotten, and your beautiful heart reflects such this wisdom! (sigh) Wonderful senryu, dearest friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-10-22 08:56 PM

That's a real beauty Krawdad, glad to see you again.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

7 posted 2001-10-23 12:18 PM

so true Krawdad! Great write!
Cindi

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2001-10-23 01:18 AM

Krawdad, an excellent write...
I enjoyed this read2nite

*~coco~*

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2001-10-23 01:23 AM

How did you know my mind was migrating south?
Good poem, Krawdad!

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