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Open Poetry #16

In Reach of Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-09 05:22 PM

In Reach
of Love

As I
reach for love
my fingers touch
empty lonesome air.

Why say you
love me
and then
disappear?

Jameslee
October09
2001

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-10-09 05:27 PM

James, so beautiful, yet sad! Have to go after her before she disappears.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-10-09 06:32 PM

James, this is so touching.....always right to my heart.......

for you

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-10-10 07:09 AM

Lovely write, but so sad that love often works out this way

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-10-10 07:19 PM

Dear James...this was such a giant lonesome sigh! A very compelling few words. Excellent grasp of loneliness.

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-10 07:29 PM

Oh James....such a tender sad write. So much in so few words.
~Hugs, NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-10-10 08:33 PM

So sad, James. Very well expressed.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-10-10 09:08 PM

I like this style, great poem.

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