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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 10-08-2001 07:45 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


We will be one
as the sea gathers
upon the dry shores
leading its tides to
ebb the endless destiny
I feel when we
are together

Hold my eyes in
yours, tell me you
cant see it, brush
my trembling lips,
tell me you dont
feel it, hear me speak
your name whispering
softly, for this moment,
I know love

Dance me in golden
streams of passion,
take my desire
place it upon your heart,
let our soul be one

Your hands on my body,
move me into the realms
of darkness I long for
when you can not be seen
among the stars, yet
still you are woven
in my tapestry
of elegant ache

As the stars form
midnights hue
I lay with you,
Whispering your gentle name

Man of soft ecstasy
in this   m o m e n t
I know love



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).]

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"Your hands on my body,
move me into the realms
of darkness I long for
when you can not be seen
among the stars, yet
still you are woven
in my tapestry
of elegant ache"

this is just stunning  
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2 posted 10-08-2001 08:17 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

We will be one
as the sea gathers
upon the dry shores
leading its tides to
ebb the endless destiny
I feel when we
are together

Hold my eyes in
yours, tell me you
cant see it, brush
my trembling lips,
tell me you dont
feel it, hear me speak
your name whispering
softly, for this moment,
I know love
==============================

Dear dear Lauren...
when your muse whispers to you from the stars and the tides...
there is nothing that you cant write that I dont feel......
this is exquisite and laced with your signature soft gentle grace.
Im not here as much these days...but Im so glad I didnt miss this beauty

jm

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 10-08-2001 08:22 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

This is just stunningly beautiful!!
Romantic and lyrical.  
Much enjoyed.  ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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By the sea


4 posted 10-08-2001 08:59 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

I haven't the words to adequately describe how lovely I find this, Lauren.  *hug* my friend.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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5 posted 10-08-2001 09:01 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


*sighs*  This is so gorgeous  
Yes, indeed, that is a perfect moment!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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6 posted 10-08-2001 09:24 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

now you know why you will always be one of my favorite poets. . . *sigh*. . .

this is truly one of your best. . . from your heart. . . excellent. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 10-08-2001 09:25 PM       View Profile for Chelsea~   Email Chelsea~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chelsea~

greeneyes,

wow! this is
beautiful
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SEA~

Wow, thank you so much....I dont think I have ever received stunning before, it made me smile!

Lauren~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).]

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Janet Marie~~

You are so golden, with your words, and kindness....thank you for being you, and understanding, you are so appreciated...



Lauren~
***


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).]

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Enchantress~~


Thank you for taking time to read, I humbled by your comment....I appreciate that so much~


Lauren~


***



I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).]

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11 posted 10-09-2001 02:38 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Lauren,

This was all red roses, satin and lace, and romatically exquisite.  I loved this piece.  

Oh, and by the way.........     

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

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12 posted 10-09-2001 03:07 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice...I enjoy moments like this...James
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Sharon,

thank you so much...and for the birthday wish....that means so much to me....  

Lauren

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-09-2001).]

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JamesMichael~

so do I, thank you for stopping in...  

Lauren

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i can't help but read this stunnin' piece and be moved..everytime..you're so talented..and i'm proud to call you my close mate..

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Lauren,

     *sighs* Sooooooo pretty!!!!! This is just stunning. I loved it

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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