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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Twilight Blue When amber turns to twilight blue my thoughts go back to memories of you. ~*~ Walks by the sea, hand in hand feeling the softness of cool wet sand. ~*~ Caught up like the waves crashing to shore loving words expressed, longing for more. ~*~ The gentle sea breeze, passing through our hair taking with it all things, so unfair. ~*~ Two lovers embracing in a world of their own lost in loves bliss, the outcome unknown. ~*~ Two days by the sea and nights with the full moon a lovers paradise to be over to soon. ~*~ Nights filled with such sweet passion days of laughter and sunshine, loves compassion. ~*~ When I feel sad as the dark black skies my thoughts go back; no memory dies. ~*~ When amber turns to twilight blue I'll be thinking of our love saying, thank you. ~sunshinemist~ (c)2001 Marie C. smiles ~Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunshineMist~ 'When amber turns to twilight blue my thoughts go back to memories of you.' This is just lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Marge, thank you so much for your comments. I adore sunsets and the moon and evenings, plus romance.   ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sounds like a good equation to me. . . wonderfully done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marie, this is so lovely. Such sweet romantic memories. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Sven, thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment. A good equation it is! smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nancy, thank you so much. I do like those memories, especially by the water. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem is very visual. Loved the read. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very lovely! Charisma |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Domzi, thank you very much for your nice compliment. glad you noticed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chrisma, Thank you for reading. smiles ~Marie~ |
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