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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-10-08 04:40 PM

Of all the things that make my day
Of all the wonderful words you say
Of all the pictures I can view
Of all the thoughts I think of you

Many feelings we have come to share
ones so close, you know i'm there
spirit yes, body no
Its all part of the love we know

To say three words are never enough
even though at times its tough
Just see the power in my eyes
and darling, realise
I love you

Richy

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-10-08 04:42 PM

Threee words that speak volumes

Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-10-08 04:57 PM

This is a most beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it with us

Zu

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"
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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-10-08 05:01 PM

spirit yes, body no
Its all part of the love we know

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Beautiful.....I wonder if words would ever suffice...

I loved it...

Thank you
*******************

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-10-08 05:12 PM

Brevity becomes you, especially when you tell the love of your life just that much...

and in that, you've said it all...

well done, Sir!

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

5 posted 2001-10-08 05:21 PM

shhhh...you will make me blush! - thank you all for your kind words, indeed the world is made of kindness..

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-08 05:26 PM

Beautiful Poem, and those 3 little words mean so much! Enjoyed.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-10-08 05:28 PM

This is a beautiful poem.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2001-10-08 08:39 PM

Sweet... very...

~Tier

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2001-10-08 09:49 PM

Just see the power in my eyes'

WOW~ so much power in how eyes can speak...

nicely said....

Greeneyes~

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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
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Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

10 posted 2001-10-09 01:36 PM

-thank you all for your comments, to write from the soul is to pen with my heart.....

thanks again

x

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2001-10-10 07:07 AM

A lovely piece, written from the heart.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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