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Diamond Ring |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Never has he bought her a diamond ring He has always bought her fishing poles Now, their lives are so full of holes If he ever did, it would have made her sing With her he acts like he is the king He doesn’t even bring her a rose He always just keeps her on her toes And makes her do everything All he ever did was call her names And always made her feel so bad She never wanted to play his games Cause it always made her feel so sad She’s still waiting for him to bring Her just one diamond ring. ©By Sue 8/23/01 |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Enjoyed the read! I have the diamond ring, but I would rather have the rose.  Now, that is. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick, Well the game isn't over. You never know. Enjoyed the read |
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StarLiteRose Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 20Rose from the Sky |
Very nice! I enjoyed reading this poem! "The Stars shine bright and down upon me, the Rose of the Sky" -Me |
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