navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Breakfast At Tiffany's
Open Poetry #16
Post A Reply Post New Topic Breakfast At Tiffany's Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-08 05:21 AM


Breakfast At Tiffany's

Well now it wasn't me that was stumbling around in the club desiring all my attention.
Pulling me onto the dance floor and demanding to dance every dance.
Even after you realized I didn't speak that much French and had only spent one year in France.
Still I have to admit I had lots of fun on that dance floor
and those soft whisper's in my ear and French kisses kept me begging for more.
So when you said "Hi I'm Tiffany can you take me home and tuck me into bed."
I kept on dancing but was carefully considering those words you had said.
Now as we awaken on this morning after we find ourselves sharing awkward moments in your bed.
My jockey shorts long gone yet still where they lay
and you in full possession of a hangover in red lingerie.
So baby don't just sit there staring down at me.
I'm ready for some breakfast in bed at Tiffany's.

JamesLee
October07
2001

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-10-08 08:32 PM


James, this sounds like a pretty good evening..And well done, some of the lines really jumped out at me.
Sandra

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-10-08 08:34 PM


interesting story indeed...

*smiles*

~Tier

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2001-10-08 08:36 PM


heeheehee shame on you James  
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-08 09:03 PM


James!!  Is this based on fact?  Like, did it really happen???  Enjoyed!  ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-10-08 10:03 PM


I wonder what you might have tipped the staff. . .  

great job James. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2001-10-08 10:51 PM


LMAO. I can only imagine what was served at breakfast. OOH la la, vous etes tres funny!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-10-09 02:20 AM


Thank you Sandra, Tiersden, Sea, Nancy, Sven and Midnitesun.
I recently went to a local dance club with one of my friends and a lovely women was very friendly with me and I think this is what stirred up so old memories from long ago in a far off place and yes some of this is based on memories and some is fantasy...I leave those choices to you...
For any that speak French and believe me I only know a little but I learned one phrase while I lived one year in France that I don't think I'll ever forget...and forgive my spelling...it's all French to me...
Vous le vous coucher avec moi...which means...well I'll let those proficient in French interpret this for themselves...James

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
8 posted 2001-10-09 10:31 AM


I know what it means  
Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
9 posted 2001-10-10 11:55 AM


Well, it's Greek to me, but I loved your story

Oh, I can make and educated guess as to the interpretation

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Breakfast At Tiffany's

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary