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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-07 12:36 PM



Someone to hold me
I search for warmth
In this coldness
I need someone's touch
To kiss me deeply
and not to lie
To speak of love
to make me smile
To love me tender
to give me hope
I want someone to call my own
To make me dream
to need my love
To embrace me
Someone to love

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
1 posted 2001-10-07 01:40 PM


Sir Walker
This Lady agrees with thy words *s

Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
2 posted 2001-10-07 01:54 PM


Lovely write. I think we all need that one!  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

[This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-07-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-07 02:24 PM


Very very well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-10-07 05:20 PM


Now this is something we all need.  Nicely said!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
5 posted 2001-10-07 05:56 PM


you captured these feelings very well!!

Well done.

Charisma

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2001-10-07 07:26 PM


walker - read it and liked it very much. What else can one say?

BC

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2001-10-07 08:03 PM


walker,
really enjoyed reading this. i hope
you find that special lady, and i am
sure that you will!! just keep up the
hope and the faith, shes out there just
waiting for you wishing for the same things
you are. take care m'friend.

amy  

"If I am ever going to mend this broken heart...you look like a good place to start"

~George Strait~

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
8 posted 2001-10-07 08:04 PM


Beautiful words, beautiful thought, beautiful feeling.
You will find that someone :-)

LITL,
Heather (aka CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

9 posted 2001-10-07 08:46 PM


Doesn't anyone read the copyright names on poems?  Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't Eunice a female name?  
Now, that said, this is a great poem.  Love will find you, again...probably a day after you stop looking for it.
Please don't ever stop writing about it.  

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