Open Poetry #16 |
Someone to love |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Someone to hold me I search for warmth In this coldness I need someone's touch To kiss me deeply and not to lie To speak of love to make me smile To love me tender to give me hope I want someone to call my own To make me dream to need my love To embrace me Someone to love |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
This Lady agrees with thy words *s Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Lovely write. I think we all need that one! smiles ~Marie~ Keep the Faith [This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-07-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very well done! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Now this is something we all need. Nicely said! All writing comes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you captured these feelings very well!! Well done. Charisma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
walker - read it and liked it very much. What else can one say? BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
walker, really enjoyed reading this. i hope you find that special lady, and i am sure that you will!! just keep up the hope and the faith, shes out there just waiting for you wishing for the same things you are. take care m'friend. amy "If I am ever going to mend this broken heart...you look like a good place to start" |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Beautiful words, beautiful thought, beautiful feeling. You will find that someone :-) LITL, Heather (aka CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Doesn't anyone read the copyright names on poems? Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't Eunice a female name? Now, that said, this is a great poem. Love will find you, again...probably a day after you stop looking for it. Please don't ever stop writing about it. |
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