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Duncan
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0 posted 2001-10-06 11:49 PM




Your body held me
suspended
in fevered, narcotic haze

should I have known
some beauty is just surface

no matter
I would have lay down, anyway


© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-07 12:19 PM


How true, how true. No matter whether we know the outcome, if it's love, we'll take the chance. We only have the low's, because we've lived such highs.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-07 12:47 PM


Wow...you've got me dancin and prancin with this one!
'Tis true, I did it too.
And would again, given half a chance.

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-10-07 10:24 AM


Duncan,

You really do have a unique style.
This is very lovely and speaks volumes.

And, sigh, yes I think we all have.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-10-07 10:30 AM


Wow, shades of my past life ...
This is quite powerful, and so true at so many different times of our lives.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-10-07 11:24 AM


Duncan,
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-10-07 12:04 PM


Enjoyed this one I did!  Been there, done that...etc.  Good write my friend.  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

walker
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Florida
7 posted 2001-10-07 12:56 PM


What we do for love, is in our eyes(the truth) but we fool ourselves for love's sake. Love this one and ouch...it hurts.
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
8 posted 2001-10-08 12:15 PM


Oh boy...it's like you were inside my head for a minute.  You have great insight.  Wonderful write.  :-)
Balladeer
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9 posted 2001-10-08 12:23 PM


...but we would lay down in a different frame of mind.....and that makes all the difference.
The Lady of Shallot
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10 posted 2001-10-08 11:49 AM


wow and double wow!
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