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Advice of the Goddess
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Advice of the Goddess |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Late one night while walking sadly underneath a moon lit badly did appear a goddess glowing touched my tears and smiled with knowing. "You must look up, she shines for you stop weeping, life is not so blue. Stars still twinkle into the night reach up for them, bathe in their light." I then arrive at glistened lake and see my chance to alter fate take hold of all the dreams and plans, This is the time to take a stand. My gaze reflects the goddess glow she tells me I have far to go as time will not stand still for me now must I venture to be free. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My gaze reflects the goddess glow she tells me I have far to go as time will not stand still for me now must I venture to be free. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sandra, this is most beautiful! A good read on a lonely Saturday night. Thank you. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice. Your goddess gives good advice. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"You must look up, she shines for you stop weeping, life is not so blue. Stars still twinkle into the night reach up for them, bathe in their light." Sometimes, happiness is there for the listening. Made me feel good...hopeful. Thanks. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
so must we all my friend. . . wonderfully done. . . you know that I love this one. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What tender, beautiful thoughts you have penned Sandra. This piece is simply enchanting. I then arrive at glistened lake and see my chance to alter fate take hold of all the dreams and plans, This is the time to take a stand. I loved all the words, but that stanza really spoke to me. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
If only more people allowed themselves to be 'touched' by the Goddess, the world would be a much better place. Loved this!!!! Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your goddess and your muse are making you very lovely! New spirit in your words shining through. So encouraging for us all. Sincerely, Regina |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
My gaze reflects the goddess glow she tells me I have far to go as time will not stand still for me now must I venture to be free. I think your goddess sprinkled some moon dust on you! ~Enjoyed this lovely piece~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned.....love your thoughts Charisma |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A magical resolution. -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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