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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-10-06 03:51 PM



'Heartsong'


     You’re notes of pure music
     to the strings of my heart.
     Can you not hear this melody
     which emits from my lips?
     Do you not see this rhythm
     of you in my life?
     I am your instrument
     to play as you wish.

Let’s make music and sing about life and loving,
about passion and grins, and that smile of sin
which quickens the pace of blood to my face.
Let’s join in a chorus of verses just for us,
of joys and occasions we laugh with abandon,
of dreams and wishes sealed snugly in kisses,
of hugs that are tight and last through the night.
Let’s make a song of a lifetime strong
with warmth and devotion and respect for the union
of two souls as friends which should never end.

     You’re notes of pure music
     to the strings of my heart.
     Stroked by a hug
     and plucked by a kiss,
     I am your instrument
     to play as you wish.



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Joie de Vivre
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since 2001-09-29
Posts 21
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1 posted 2001-10-06 03:56 PM


Rambling back to you ... this sings very well, I do hope you read it outloud to a lover, maybe with a guitar string or two.  This music, just music, just passion begging for a dance.  BEEE-YOU-TEE-FUL.
Joie

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-06 06:02 PM


You’re notes of pure music
     to the strings of my heart.
     Stroked by a hug
     and plucked by a kiss,
     I am your instrument
     to play as you wish.
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I can't sing but I can hum, okay?
Jeph you never ramble!  Enjoyed!  ~Nancy~  Spice?

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-10-06 06:46 PM


like it when you ramble on.....

Charisma

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with you
4 posted 2001-10-07 01:22 AM


tenderly strumming
softly singing along
you are the words
to my heart's song
together we create
love's sweet melody
your soul and mine
in romantic harmony
perfectly blended
gentleness and heat
creating together
sensual beat
beautiful music
that will never relent
play me maestro
your ready instrument


~SEA~




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