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kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2001-10-06 12:28 PM

A gentle Autumn breeze blows
as I sit here on the river bank
where we shared our summer days

Leaves painted with colour
which heard our words of love
float unknowingly to another place

Laughter had filled our world
Smiles lit our opaque nights
So eerie now the silence

The trees bow so gracefully
their branches lightly brushed the water
just as your lips had once touched mine

Even though the skies my darken
my heart is full of light
for there is where you will stay

Life now continues onward
but my memories will remain
of you My Summer Love

©Kathy Harmon-Oct 6,2001

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-10-06 12:39 PM

Hey, sweet lady! Memories of your posts just a few short months ago put a smile on my face. You always have warm kind things to say, and keep positive memories close to the surface. Thanks, Kacy

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-10-07 06:25 PM

Your imagery is so beautiful here. A really unique way of expressing the change into a memory. Enjoyed!

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-07 06:29 PM

The trees bow so gracefully
their branches lightly brushed the water
just as your lips had once touched mine
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Oh I really like this,..well done!! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-10-07 08:06 PM

I REALLY liked this a lot!! This
was beautifully expressive. I have
never read your work prior to today.
but I shall start!! Take care.

Amy

"If I am ever going to mend this broken heart...you look like a good place to start"

~George Strait~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-08 12:48 PM

You don't know how much this speaks to me. On a recent holiday, I visited a place that a past love and I spent time in. This conjures up those thoughts I had. Beautifully written.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

6 posted 2001-10-08 01:54 AM

Thank-you everyone for your replies. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I do not get here as often as I like(work keeps me busy) and miss reading all of yours. Sometimes it is hard to play catch-up and post so I want to say
Everyone here is so talented--What a great community
Take Care
kitkat

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-10-08 10:06 PM

wonderfully done. . . good to see you again. . .

this brought back a lot of memories. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-10-08 11:11 PM

kitkat, this was so wonderfully written and so very much enjoyed by this reader.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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