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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I thought that you filled up my world You took away the space inside of me then filled me up so I could be a vessel of a love so free... Within my shining love lit eyes You stood as tall as any Prince could do I didn’t know until today that I would not be all to you... And taken wholly by surprise I watched as all my dreams came crashing down I am alone, nowhere to go just holding on, and spinning round... Where once you filled my heart with hope now lies despair in all it’s deepest pain my glass of love is powder dry and only emptiness remains... for my friend, who is no longer I miss you The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is a good poem, but more to the point, what is it about? I hope all is ok???? I must have an email. Luv S |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
broke my heart because I know this feeling. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Absolutely a beautiful poem with very meaningful words. I need an e-mail too! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Sunny I know this feeling when all of the desires within us come alive and then we find that they have no where to go...no one to share them with...yes I know this feeling...a soft hug for you...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Remember these old song lyrics? (modified m a bit): "Sunny(one) you're so true I love you." Hugs dear friend, and I hope tomorrow is a sunnier day for you. |
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