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My Sisters---lovely luck of rhyme

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 10-05-2001 11:21 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Truly, truly am I blessed.
So now a prayer of thankfulness.
Wondrous love in plentitude,
I think it's time for gratitude...

"Tie a string around your toe,
lest you float away!"
Advice that soothed me as aloe.
Sharon? I send my love your way.

And a childhood fantasy
came true via Janet Marie.
A twin in her, as she is me.
Janet? Butterflies are free.
And yes you ARE a butterfly!
I'm honored you're a friend of mine.

My doreen, is such a dream
she cracks me up--she makes me scream.
Her words outpour tell EVERYTHING--
her thoughts, my heart in flow of stream.

Marge is the echo of my heart.
Methinks she knows my every thought.
Never has she missed a beat
and sweetly wiped tears from my cheek.

Nan is there to take my hand.
I was surprised to find her there.
I thought of her as distant queen,
yet she's constant breath of air.

Luscious, lovely, sweet Maree,
always has been there for me,
and Kamla is my sanity...
like feeling ground beneath my feet.

Karilea's lovely name
sang to me a sweet refrain
She see things in a different light...
truly she is sun's shine bright.

Mrs. Santos is a gift divine.
Ambrosia is the best describe.
I gobble up her every rhyme
and every poem a divine dine.

Martie, be another gift...
her words are as the sands in shift.
Her pen, like mine, writes ink of blood--
she writes with wisdom from above.

Mysteria, is ME again...
made me believe I can be friends...
with inner spirit that I war
a lesson of what life is FOR.

Spitfire is a whisper's shout.
Her talent sparks my inner doubts.
I read the words she blithely pens
and swear I'll never write again.

Temptress, she amazes me
how can soft intensely be?
And after reading angrybraids,
I swear I'll never see the same.

Sandra croons the saddest tunes--
I fear she feels the pain, like me...
catalinamoon--ARISE--
and cast your glory on the sea...

Sea, is sparkling full of hope,
and constant with the pull of tide--
each wave another splash of brave
in salt of all the tears she's cried.

Regina, Krista, Honeybee...
each one of you a part of me
Irish Rose blooms delicately.
Kit has generosity.
She sees much more clearly than me.

A lonely wolf made friends with me.
She frightened me. I thought me, MEAL.
But as the lion's paw with thorn,
We found solace in forlorn.

Paula, my sweet lovely friend...
Happiness should do her in!
Patience in humanity--
I'm glad she waited up for me.

Elizabeth did strike a chord...
harmonies of inner core
I know the pain was ill afford,
but thank you so...my Miss Corr!

The face that launched a thousand ships...
Helen, gives men dreams of kiss.
How I miss my meadowmuse,
and fyre of sky sings perfect tune.

Maureen with grace of dancer's stance...
each word heard just screams romance,
and if your name is not found here,
know that in my heart you're near...

Each face of Goddess does reside
and all of you be Passion's pride.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-05-2001 11:42 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey O' Gorgeous One! you're incredible! you know that? Such beautiful sentiments you have penned.

Thank you  

Maree  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 10-05-2001 11:52 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you baby...you know that I know that you know  
mirrors me twin ... mirrors and dittos ...
thank you for wrapping me up in your rhymes
Serene Serendippity  
love you
me





Thelma and Louise??!!  
and if Im a butterfly...what does that make you me twin *winkiewinkie*






serenity blaze
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3 posted 10-05-2001 11:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Maree....I hug you to my heart and am popping in too, to call JM a smart ass..rofl...y'see? TWINS  
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4 posted 10-05-2001 11:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is great! Thank you for including me... and I'd like a snippet of your muse please!    
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5 posted 10-05-2001 11:59 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

What lovely thoughts you pen Serentity. The words just simply flow off the page. This could be Passions theme song

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

serenity blaze
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6 posted 10-06-2001 12:00 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Shar? um...blush...I admit to knowing that he has been circumsized!!!   love you!

Missed you Tracy...damn.   thank you, and love to you as well, and now I will calm down...just felt overwhelmed for the outpouring of caring you all have shown me....blush..

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-06-2001).]

Janet Marie
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7 posted 10-06-2001 12:38 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Did someone order a pizza   hehe
twins for the twins  LOL
now thats seeing double
woohoo rofl....

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Ah sweet Serenity
your words echo deep within
and tho we may not be a twin
kindred spirits, together us two
so much of me
I find written by you
  

thank you, you are amazing.  
serenity blaze
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9 posted 10-06-2001 12:58 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

SEA...if JM is right? We all mirror each other, so applause to amazing YOU!

And Jan? hmmm...interesting graphic...perhaps maybe..that guy overlooking the other two..y'know..IN BLUE..might look comfy with the "serenity blue" photo? HINT HINT HINT ROFL...

(YEP...me having a grand ole time t'nite...love is lovely!)

to ya both!
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Ser..what a wonderful tribute to all of your friends, and I am most honored, Dear Lady, to be a part of it.  

You speak of soft like everyone,
I'm finding this common speak.
But tense seas rumble deep within,
I'm my heart upon a shelf.
Rising sweetness overflows
Each desire grows and grows,
As sweetest softness casts a sound
All at once, myself you've found.

hmmm..dunno where this was going, but it was inspired of course.   LOL! My rhyming monster got out for some air. Looks like he choked!  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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awww!  Well aren't you just the sweetest   Thank you so much for the gift of friendship, you've made me feel at home at Passions  

Love and hugs  
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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12 posted 10-06-2001 11:14 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Serenity--I did not think to be here, among these lucky ones, sisters of words and strength, to be a part of heart.  Thank you that I am!  
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Add some serenity to this poem, and it's perfect...
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Oh Serenity ... this is such a treasure!  You've captured so many wonderful aspects of soooo many ladies whose wonderful words and hearts I cherish also. Thank you so much for the sweet words, and for who "you" are as well ... this is just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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15 posted 10-06-2001 03:58 PM       View Profile for Topheth   Email Topheth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Topheth

Beautiful in thought and write and read.
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16 posted 10-06-2001 04:09 PM       View Profile for sunshinemist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sunshinemist

Very Beautiful!!

warm hugs,
~Marie~
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awwwwww..... that's soooooo
sweeeeeeeeeeeettttttt

*smile*
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Very sweet and thoughtful!  Enjoyed.  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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Oh you are so sweet, this is wonderfully done, and I agree with all of the compliments you posted of the others, and I turn them all around onto YOU.
Sandra
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Serenity

I am often told I  write of romance
sometimes happy, sometimes sad
I just hope that my words are enjoyed by some..thank you for the wonderful mention..and yes, we are all sisters on here.

hugs

~Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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Awwwwww!   and you included lil' ole me?  
Thank you, this was wonderful!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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What an amazing sisterhood! All special gems  that speak words so powerful, poetic, but with firm softness. The passionate poetesses prevail.
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23 posted 10-07-2001 01:07 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Do you have any idea how special I think you are?  Yup I think you do!  Thank you so much for being a friend Karen, I treasure that, and thank you for this *a huge Canadian hug*

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

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24 posted 10-07-2001 01:31 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

To all my lovely sisters---I humbly thank YOU. And especially to those I've yet to meet--just the thought that there is still yet more is exciting. I love you all.  
 
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