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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Echoes curl from the hillsides warped by distance, unfamiliar and just because it was your own cry does not make it any less haunting |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
hehe , odd and yet intreauging  just the way i like em . Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
no, it makes it more....... wonderfully said! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Listen to thyself... You might just have something worthwhile to say...  |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very haunting, I would say.. I like it! |
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Joie de Vivre Junior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 21USA |
echo echo into the canyon yet the answer given to me is my own voice disrupted the tiniest reflection in the fewest words just to nibble upon your fear enjoyed enjoyed enjoyed  |
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