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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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0 posted 2001-10-05 07:53 PM

Basking In Your Love

Your gentle love washes over my heart
Like tender raindrops from a summer storm
Before I met you my life did not start
In your loving arms I feel safe and warm.

Your smile warms me like the sun above
My soul basking in its stunning glory
Your heart fitting mine like a perfect glove
Time and care building our own love story

My future shines inside your dark brown eyes
Passion burning inside my heart so deep
Filled with your love my heart quietly sighs
Your love is one I will forever keep

Body mind and soul i want you with me
Your love making me all that I can be

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-05 07:56 PM

Oh my!!!! Tara, do you know that every time I read a new poem by you, your writing skill improves

I am impressed, this is a wonderful sonnet - right up my alley! This is so beautiful, I felt every word

Well done!

I'm so happy for you both!

Take care, m'friend,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-05 09:10 PM

Oh, hold on to this love!!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-05 09:17 PM

RP~

awwww.......this is so sweet, you made me grin

so happy for you

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-10-06 01:27 PM

Tara,

Your work only becomes more lovely with each new poem, my friend. So pretty...

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 2001-10-06 05:13 PM

A wonderful love poem.

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

6 posted 2001-10-06 06:24 PM

A love like that is one to hold on to for life. :-)
LITL,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-06 06:27 PM

Well done!! Very lovely. Enjoyed, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-10-06 06:51 PM

Ahhhhhhhhh, Love sweet love! Enjoyed.

Warm smiles and hugs,
~Marie~

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

9 posted 2001-10-07 01:59 AM

ok, dear, you win.
against such a lovely statement, even i have no defense, so, you win.
you have successfully dragged me, kicking and screaming, into the world of rhyme and meter.
God help us all.
Napalm's gonna write a sonnet.
Sheesh.
I love you too, you know.

-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-10-07 04:30 AM

Like this RosePetals...James

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