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staybellmined
Junior Member
since 2001-07-29
Posts 21
insanity, usa (killeen,tx)

0 posted 2001-10-05 07:36 PM




frustrated

dedicated
spaced out of time


worn down

isolated
within myself
as the world

around me


slowly starts
to selfdestruct

into passing realities and sinking dreams

© Copyright 2001 James - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-05 08:08 PM


Very strong and effective!
in so few words

well done
love it.

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-05-2001).]

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2001-10-06 01:35 AM


Whatever you're doing, PLEASE take care of you. This expresses your frustration well. enjoyed.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2001-10-06 01:17 PM


I'm very glad that you're so staybellmined... Listen to yourself - You've much to say...
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