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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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'Sweet Inspiration' My words are soft and distant clouds to be condensed for meaning, wiped away like a mist, as dew upon the vivid bloom of flower. I cannot speak with force, am constantly blown by the winds of emotion, helpless as petals upon the waves. I need a rock, need a hold, need a love, strong and bold. [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"am constantly blown by the winds of emotion, helpless as petals upon the waves." Beautiful flow and phrasing within this lovely verse Topheth! A delicate rendering of tender thoughts ... very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow.....very nice very tender very big brown eyes......oops  easy to get sidetracked.......... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Very nicely done Topheth. Your phrases are wonderful. I love it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Susan...very nice very tender ...very big brown eyes, oops, Tell me to behave Jeph  Good write....you know I enjoyed it! ~hugs, Nancy~ Spice?? What is that? ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very nice flow. I enjoyed each line. Refreshing imagery as well...the poem dear Sir. As you are taking hold of some of our poetesses! We have a fine appreciation for all things lovely. Wonderful verse. Sincerely, Regina |
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