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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-10-05 05:37 PM


The
Wonder
  of
    You

Did you come
      from
         above?
Why is your heart
      so full
         of love?
Were you born
      with a
         soft heart
or did God
      send angels
         from above
to touch you
      and bless you
         and fill you
             with his love?
Who on earth
      could have
         the wisdom
             possessed by you?
Every action
      and reaction
         so sweet
             and warm
                 and true.
I love
      the mystery
             and the
                  wonder of you.


JamesLee
October05,2001
forMysteria


© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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1 posted 2001-10-05 05:42 PM


this is lovely and I'm sure she deserves it!
sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-05 05:44 PM


James, That was simply beautiful!! Very well done, and I liked your style.  

warm smiles,
~Marie~

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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3 posted 2001-10-05 09:32 PM


This is wonderful, her poetry sooths the soul.
SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-10-05 09:36 PM


James   you are so romantic   I just love that about you   this is wonderful  
Tracey
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5 posted 2001-10-06 12:14 PM


This is so lovely James. Ah, to inspire such thoughts!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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6 posted 2001-10-06 12:21 PM


What a lovely poem for such a lovely person.

--------------
You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-10-06 12:27 PM


very nice, JamesM *s
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Midnitesun
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8 posted 2001-10-06 02:14 PM


And it's so wonderful of you
  to write something so true,
  about the mysterious source
  of wisdom in our Mysteria.

Nicely penned, James.
  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2001-10-08 02:36 AM


Thank you Lady, Marie, walker, Sea, tracey, KitKat, Wynter and Midnitesun for reading and commenting...
I appreciate Mysteria's soft heart...very soothing...James

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2001-10-08 07:55 AM


James,

    Oh this is beautiful.. I do believe this is one of my favorite of yours.  So tender.. so romantic.  I am saving this one

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

rosepetals25
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11 posted 2001-10-08 07:57 AM


Ummm.. I forgot to hit the add thread to library button   Hey... what can I say.. it's only 8am... *chuckles*

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
12 posted 2001-10-08 09:57 AM


Very good. I like this.
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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13 posted 2001-10-08 12:14 PM


James,
This is beautiful...loved the way you presented it...I'm sure Mysteria will love it too!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2001-10-08 12:52 PM


James..I think this is beautiful and Mysteria I am sure will too!!  Loved your presentation here as well.  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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