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arthur
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0 posted 2001-10-05 02:47 PM


  
Were you walking in the starlight in the quiet of the night
Shall I find you in the garden by the sun's first
early light
Are you standing by the arbour where you liked to sit and sew
Or tending the sweet scented roses that we planted long ago

Shall I hear you calling in the wind that stirs the trees
What is that you are saying? Or do the leaves move with the breeze
I will go now to our garden and another morning share
We are not for ever parted
You are there .You are there!

arthur

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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-10-05 03:15 PM


Very lovely arthur...enjoyed

              ~Victoria~

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-10-05 03:18 PM


A hazy veil of ghostly longing...

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-10-05 03:23 PM



arthur~  Such a touching write...may you find peace in your starlight garden.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

The Lady of Shallot
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4 posted 2001-10-05 03:50 PM


I have a dear friend in England, this is wonderful, Arthur, just so peaceful!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-10-05 04:00 PM


We are not for ever parted
You are there .You are there!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I LOVE this piece...you just KNOW I do!
Beautiful Michael....enjoyed.
Hugs across the pond.  ~NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Ven
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6 posted 2001-10-05 04:53 PM


So beautiful and so very sad. A wonderful piece.
catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-10-05 05:13 PM


Arthur, I hope you see her there. Lovely haunting poem.
Sandra

sunshinemist
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8 posted 2001-10-05 06:01 PM


Arthur, A very beautiful poem. Love blows kisses in the wind and in your garden.

warm smiles, ~Marie~

rwood
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9 posted 2001-10-05 07:18 PM


I admire the recognition..of a signature from someone you love. Very lovely and searching.

Sincerely,
Regina

Tracey
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10 posted 2001-10-06 12:42 PM


Oh Arthur, this is just so pretty and loving. I can just picture this scene in my minds eye. You paint it so well.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

S Arthur Grey
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11 posted 2001-10-06 01:22 AM


...and a warm breeze
on the cheek
like the kiss
that once was there...

Nicely done, Sir.

paladin
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12 posted 2001-10-06 08:29 AM


True love knows no time or distance.Good read.

paladin

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