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SEA
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0 posted 2001-10-05 10:19 AM



forgive me for not smiling
as I would normally do
today is one year
that I lost my Aunt Sue

forgive me for not laughing
with my usual glee
today really isn't
all that easy for me

forgive me for not joking
in my customary style
today I seem to have misplaced
my much needed smile

forgive me for not replying
with my accustomed glee
today my heart is rebreaking
most painfully

forgive for not knowing
exactly what to say
my words seem to fail me
on this grievous day

~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-10-05 10:22 AM


No forgiveness neccessary... hugs to you dear one...
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2 posted 2001-10-05 10:24 AM


Sea-girl, we here have borrowed so much from you, it's OK if you are short right now.  I hope tomorrow brings you joy.
SEA
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3 posted 2001-10-05 10:55 AM


thanks guys.....
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4 posted 2001-10-05 11:51 AM


SEA~
You know I not only know your sorrow, but hold it tenderly in my heart~
Especially now~
Love you, gal~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-10-05 11:56 AM



SEA~  No forgiveness needed sweet poetess.  

Sending hugs and love  
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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6 posted 2001-10-05 12:06 PM


Nothing to forgive, sweetie. You just take care of yourself.

Hugs,
~Marie~

SEA
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7 posted 2001-10-05 12:48 PM


Marge~ you will never know how much your gift means to me, how much it mattered to me to get it today. I'll never forget what you did for my heart. I love you, thank you.

Krista~ thank you very much

Marie~ thanks so much

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8 posted 2001-10-05 12:56 PM


hugs
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9 posted 2001-10-05 01:22 PM


God keep you and bless you for I know the heartache of losing someone. I know the pain of the finality of it and I pray you remember all the good things, all the wonderful attributes about your Aunt. For in loving, remembering and living we hold that picture of that person for the rest of our lives within our souls and nothing and no one can ever make it fade. It is a picture of their presence in our lives, even now,
and will always give us strength and love.

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10 posted 2001-10-05 03:05 PM


thinking of you today.....
hugs, Nancy.

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11 posted 2001-10-05 03:10 PM


my heart goes out to you....((((sea)))))
hugs...................

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12 posted 2001-10-05 03:58 PM


(((warm hugs))))

reading your words reminds me at your poem that you wrote when your dearest aunt passed away....words straith from your heart then and now....your love for this wonderful lady shines in every line, you are in my thoughts my dear friend.

Charisma

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13 posted 2001-10-05 04:03 PM


SEA, I know we can't bring that lovely smile back just yet but stick around and we'll have you feeling a little better soon.


Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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14 posted 2001-10-05 05:22 PM


Always hard to lose someone we love...a warm hug and kiss for you...take care...James
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15 posted 2001-10-05 05:22 PM


Susan, there is no reason to forgive you.  It takes time to heal.  My best to you today, sweet friend.  You're very much in my thoughts. ((((hugs))))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

SEA
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16 posted 2001-10-05 05:56 PM


well, with all these warm hugs how can I not smile?!   thank you all for this, I needed this   you guys rock  

"when I catch my breath, it's you I breathe" ~Michelle Branch~

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17 posted 2001-10-05 06:25 PM


This is such a warm and tender remembrance SEA ... she must have been a very special lady. Many hugs to you my friend.  

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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18 posted 2001-10-10 01:46 AM


SEA,
But aren't there some fond memories found in revisiting the sorrow?  It's lovely that you haven't forgotten.  So sorry for your loss.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

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