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Twilight Myst
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Just A Myst At Twilight

0 posted 2001-10-05 09:01 AM



Luna
cast down her eyes
captured by ocean's arms
swallowed from the kiss of a sweet
new morn



© Copyright 2001 Twilight Myst - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-10-05 09:33 AM



Charming!

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2001-10-05 11:00 AM


very powerful little piece...

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

sunshinemist
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Fl. sunshines early mist
3 posted 2001-10-05 11:26 AM


I liked this one! !Marie!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2001-10-05 02:58 PM


TwilightMyst~
This is just lovely~
I'm a bit of a moon-a-tic anyhow~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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5 posted 2001-10-05 03:05 PM


very beautiful indeed...

             ~Victoria~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-10-05 03:07 PM


Lovely....soft and gentle.
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
7 posted 2001-10-05 04:02 PM


Lunacy at its best.  

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
8 posted 2001-10-05 04:13 PM


Very lovely!!

Charisma

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9 posted 2001-10-06 03:45 AM


surrender

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


WRBreezin
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10 posted 2001-10-06 07:20 AM



Soft, and pulsing...like a gentle heart.

Willie B

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11 posted 2001-10-06 08:03 PM



What a perfect moment!  You've presented much beauty with such few words - well done!  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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