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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-04 09:16 PM

Words of hope in shrouds of rain
words that take away the pain.
Touching me through webs of steel
somehow you still make me feel.

Not yet..can't get over you
not yet..coming home to you.

Never did our passion die
never-though you tried to lie
Brush away dusted deceit
Destiny calls us to meet.

I would do it all for you
fly to hell and back for you.

Not too late, I always knew
not too late to taste the truth.
Crumbled dreams reform as if
magic spell sent through the mist.

Love of years reflected shine
love to last through all of time..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-04 09:20 PM

I would do it all for you
fly to hell and back for you.

Not too late, I always knew
not too late to taste the truth.
Crumbled dreams reform as if
magic spell sent through the mist.

Love of years reflected shine
love to last through all of time..
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Sandra, this is very beautiful and so full of hope. Enjoyed, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-04 10:26 PM

Oh Sandra, what a beautiful love song you sing here.

Love of years reflected shine
love to last through all of time

With a lovely ending too. Hugs to you for your upcoming journey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-10-04 10:50 PM

Crumbled dreams reform as if
magic spell sent through the mist.

Ahh, Sandra, magic spells and mist? You just cant' miss with that combination. Very nice write and hope the combination hits...very gentle smile

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-10-05 08:20 AM

very nice... tender, a sprig of hope, and love.... what more could one ask for in a poem?

I enjoyed!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-10-05 09:14 AM

Well done. Well expressed sentiment

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

6 posted 2001-10-07 12:37 PM

Sandra,
This is so beautiful, and speaks so well of all the thoughts and desires we both possess, especially now, in our lives of turmoil. We have to KTDA...It's all we've got...
Love, Elise

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-10-07 06:33 PM

I wish you the best wishes my friend. . . and may you find what you've been looking for. . .

wonderfully done. . . from the heart. . .

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