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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-04 07:40 PM


Where are you, when you should be near
Shall my pleas cease for your mind's comfort
How long can a heart hurt before it can be mended?
Must tomorrow's happiness be forever delayed
Or shall my fear engulf me as I tumble to my knees

Does the sound of raindrops mean that rain is falling?
Or is the silhouette of a butterfly in pain just in vain?
Can the rainbows appear when you call for reassurance?
Or would you rather nightfall hide your true feelings?
Never mind the sorrowful answers unless they are meaningful
For the distance travelled is more than beyond sorrow



Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

[This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 10-04-2001).]

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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-04 08:00 PM


Oh Daniel, it does sound as though your heart is aching.  If you were closer I would give you a big hug....here...(((hugs))) better?  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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