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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-04 06:59 PM


Honey

Honey
why do you
only call me
when you want
money?

Why won't you call
when you want
nothing at all
or when you
want to share
a tv show
or to go out
to a movie
with some
friends we know?

Or call me
when you're
thinking of how
you're a woman
and I'm a man
and you want to feel
me plunging into your femininity
in an exercise of my masculinity.

But then I know
that you would go
because it's all
about control
and about money.
Isn't it honey?

JamesLee
October04
2001

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-04 07:10 PM


I enjoyed this James.  Love has to be about far more than money or control.
  (((hugs))) Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
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2 posted 2001-10-04 07:29 PM


James,

Good one! But not all gals think of money.  

warm smiles,
~Marie~

catalinamoon
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3 posted 2001-10-04 07:44 PM


I know how you feel here, nicely done poem.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-10-05 06:15 AM


Thank you Nancy, Marie and Sandra...
True not all women are hung up on money...but this one is...as she says "Nothing is free".   She says she gets her Lexus in November...I can't wait to cruise...James

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