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Open Poetry #16

Drowning Rock Secrets

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-10-04 05:30 PM

Drowning Rock Secrets

there are secrets
you can not unlock
but you do know you can not
save a drowning rock
as it goes down it will
pull you deeper in
squeezing your air
bleeding you thin
in truth a rock is a rock
it can not change
so to save it
is out of your range
as it falls in the deep end
you have to let it go
for it will sink
and you can still flow

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-10-04 05:37 PM

in truth a rock is a rock
it can not change
so to save it
is out of your range
as it falls in the deep end
you have to let it go
for it will sink
and you can still flow

Very cool write...liked this part especially.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-04 05:53 PM

I received a lot of wisdom from that rock.

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

3 posted 2001-10-04 05:55 PM

Is a drowning rock the same as a sunk ship?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-10-04 06:42 PM

you can not save a drowning rock...

smiling, here Helen...I LOVE that.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-10-05 06:36 AM

rock solid wisom! I admire your release!

Sincerely,
Regina

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