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sunshinemist
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0 posted 2001-10-04 03:02 PM


Magical Moon

Oh, moon
so magical in the sky
for all the powers that you hold
your many mysteries do imply.

Why is it
that a seed planted on a certain day
will yield a healthy plant
so beautiful its display.

Your fullness has the power
to keep me up all night
and find me yet sleepless
till early morning light.

For some
your fullness does capture their soul
lovers find each other
the thief or murderer do find their goal.

Putting a fence post in the ground
sufficient dirt is always around
other times, when in darkness bound
there is not enough earth to be found.

You control the tides
from day to day
waters flowing in and out
such powers you have in a magical way.

As you move through all your phases
and your light no more upon my face
I know that you shall be found
in some far and distant place.

~sunshinemist~



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Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04
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Just A Myst At Twilight
1 posted 2001-10-04 03:09 PM


Your fullness has the power
to keep me up all night
and find me yet sleepless
till early morning light.
~~~~~~~~~

Magical is the moon,
and so is this piece!!

Beautiful indeed...


sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-04 06:05 PM


Twilight Mist,

Thank you so much for your magical comments. It is so nice to meet you too.   Love your name, opposite of mine.

Happy composing,
smiles,
~Marie~

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-10-04 07:08 PM


Hello Marie, welcome to Passions...I adore moon poetry and magick too...this is the first I've read from you, and hope to read more...and it WAS a fabulous moon last night, wasn't it?  
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-04 07:14 PM


Love poems about the moon,
and this one is beautiful!  Enjoyed!
~magical smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

sunshinemist
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5 posted 2001-10-04 07:14 PM


Serenity,

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoy the moon, me too! It was just beautiful last night. Thank you also for the nice welcome.

warm smiles,
~Marie~

walker
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since 2001-02-11
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6 posted 2001-10-04 07:16 PM


Beautiful, the moon has been, just like this poem. Thanks.
sunshinemist
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7 posted 2001-10-04 07:17 PM


Nancy,

Thank you for reading. Now we have 3 moon lovers. I adore the moon, especially a full one.

warms smiles,
~Marie~

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8 posted 2001-10-04 07:18 PM


hey you painted the moon in your words excalty as the moon is. Loved this

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


sunshinemist
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9 posted 2001-10-04 07:23 PM


Walker, thank you so much for reading. The moon was delightful last night!  

Warm smiles,
~Marie~


Moon Dust, Thank you so much for your comments. Wasn't it beautiful last night? Love that Harvest Moon.  

warm smiles,
~Marie~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2001-10-04 07:47 PM


Very nice, I like this a lot.
Sandra

sunshinemist
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11 posted 2001-10-04 07:55 PM


Sandra, Thank you so much for reading. I knew that you would like it with such a beautiful nickname. Love that one!

Warm smiles,
Marie  

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