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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-04 02:21 PM



Shakespearean Sonnet

In dismal darkness churns the soul each night,
As shadowed moon beclouds the stars in skies.
Each trailing dream, in search for trace of light
To end in peaceful sleep, absent of sighs.
To vanish, only teardrops left, remain,
Drying taut from a gentle breeze in flow,
To face another judgement filled with pain
As morning light horizons mask their show.
When earth and sky comes to the meet of day
Returning hope, for in it's certainty
That each tomorrow comes without delay.
Share the findings, those missing parts of me.
As I fall victim, sacrificed once more
To thoughts of long ago, in days of yore.


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-10-04 02:27 PM


we have to search ourselves to find
the spirit we once had...sometimes we
just have to make a few changes...enjoyed wynter..hugss

              ~Victoria~

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-10-04 02:39 PM


As I fall victim, sacrificed once more
To thoughts of long ago, in days of yore


hard not to....

nicely done...

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04
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Just A Myst At Twilight
3 posted 2001-10-04 02:48 PM


As morning light horizons mask their show.
When earth and sky comes to the meet of day
Returning hope, for in it's certainty
That each tomorrow comes without delay.
~~~~~~~~~~

This was such a wonderful read...

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