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Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

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Just A Myst At Twilight

0 posted 2001-10-04 12:36 PM

Sweet Dreams

Peel back
the shades
of night
where Luna
sleeps
beneath
her soft
comfortable
blanket of
ruffled velvet
starlight
Where dreams
of kaleidoscope
hues paint
you smiles
of sweet
tomorrow's
as you kiss
the blush on
evening's cheek
... good night

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-04 12:40 PM

Aha - I know several who will flock to see this one! Welcome to Passions! It's apparent, already, that you are going to enjoy your stay here.

Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

2 posted 2001-10-04 12:42 PM

Thank you Sunshine
for your very warm welcome
and such kind words!!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-10-04 12:53 PM

You make a lovely poetic first impression with this soft spoken beauty...
wonderful employ of imagery and phrasing.
Welcome to Poetry Land ...
I look forward to more of your impressive writing.
jm

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-04 01:00 PM

Beautiful first post!!
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!
~A Warm Welcome, from, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-10-04 01:06 PM

Such a kiss would surely melt to sweet dreams. Welcome...great first post.

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

6 posted 2001-10-04 01:13 PM

Thank you very much Janet, Nancy and Duncan
for your generous comments and such
wonderful welcome!!

I appreciate it so much!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-04 01:15 PM

I'm going to come back and read this one again at twilight. A very nice entrance.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2001-10-04 01:29 PM

Twilight,

so nice to see you here. lovely entrance you have made.
Annie (achildsheart)

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Twilight Myst
Member

since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

9 posted 2001-10-04 02:05 PM

Midnitesun and Annie,
I thank you kindly
for such nice comments
and the warm welcome!!

It's nice to see you Annie, also...

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

10 posted 2001-10-04 02:36 PM

Very beautiful first poem.

Welcome to Passions. Nice to meet you.

~Marie~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2001-10-04 02:38 PM

very nice imagery.... softly conveys the changing of day to night and makes the reader feel not only see the changes taking place... I enjoyed!!!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

12 posted 2001-10-04 02:50 PM

TwilightMyst~ *sigh* this is beautiful. Loved the magical twilight imagery

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2001-10-04 02:55 PM

very nice first post *s thank you for sharing and welcome

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

14 posted 2001-10-04 03:05 PM

Sunshinemist, Cpat Hair, and SmittenKitten (love the name)
Thanks kindly for your
very nice comments to this
piece and the welcome!!
I do appreciate it so...

Twilight Myst
Member

since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

15 posted 2001-10-04 03:17 PM

Thank you so much Wynter,
you were responding as I was sending!

Thanks once more for your nice reply!!

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

16 posted 2001-10-04 04:59 PM

Talk about an entrance!
Loved the poem, and
welcome to this happy
home of poetry.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

17 posted 2001-10-04 06:04 PM

Lovely and welcome!

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

18 posted 2001-10-04 06:24 PM

WELCOME TWILIGHT MYST! I love this as it flows and soothes one to drift upon each word. I look forward to more!

Sincerely,
Regina

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2001-10-04 06:39 PM

Like this...James

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

20 posted 2001-10-04 06:49 PM

Wonderfull flow,beautifull images.wellcome to pipTalk.

paladin

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

21 posted 2001-10-04 11:02 PM

Domzi, The Lady of Shallot,
rwood, James, and paladin,
many thanks for your ever
so warm remarks to this piece!!

Thanks also for the
wonderful welcome!
You are all so very kind!!

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

22 posted 2001-10-05 04:39 AM

Hi Twi, you know I love this one...Just Great!

Willie B

cottage
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

23 posted 2001-10-05 05:26 AM

gosh i love this poem!

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

24 posted 2001-10-05 05:50 AM

Welcome! A wonderful first post.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Twilight Myst
Member

since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

25 posted 2001-10-05 07:14 AM

Willie, Cottage, and Eagle One,
many thanks for your comments!!
I'm so glad you like this!!

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