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crazymary
Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 14
nebraska

0 posted 2001-10-04 12:49 PM


You look so peaceful lying there
lost in dreams
without a care
I long to kiss that soft red mouth
and stroke your tousled hair
whisper to your sleeping heart
and ask if I am there
Your skin looks soft and so enticing
just waiting for my touch
I can feel the warmth I long for
my body aches for yours so much
I could wake you gently
and revel in your smile
or lay my head beside yours
and hear you dreaming
for awhile

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-04 03:01 AM


I could wake you gently
and revel in your smile
or lay my head beside yours
and hear you dreaming
for awhile


Lovely thoughts here CM  
Thanks for sharing them  

Maree

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2001-10-09 11:12 AM


I liked this one.  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-10-09 03:23 PM


Like this...very smooth...may I suggest "Sharing Dreams"?   James
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