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Icy Fright
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Icy Fright |
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Night_Myst Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 34River Falls, WI |
It starts so simply The coolness creeps into the fingertips Almost too subtle to notice A glance The chills creep into my toes Through my arms and legs now Still just chills A whisper? Now the coldness enters my lungs And the back of my neck A hint of fear Whispers My brain is freezing Thoughts slowing I scream, silently Voices The icy finger touches my heart I feel it grip it firmly Can’t break free Make them stop! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooo I like it yuh Welcome to Passions this poem frightened me into each word I read o yuh what a pace you kept! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is one cool poem. Well done. Enjoyed it alan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightMyst~ Ooooooh, gave me the chills too~ Welcome to Passions~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
One word...Chilling. Great job. Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present. |
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