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Alan
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0 posted 2001-10-03 10:59 PM



Nothing done
Can’t be undone
Nothing undone
Can’t be redone
One step
Is all it takes.
That’s up to you


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2001-10-03 11:12 PM


To take that step
is a big decision
and I may be left
with nothing.

Loved it.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-03 11:13 PM


Good one Alan!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Alan
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3 posted 2001-10-03 11:18 PM


Don't take the step
what do you have
empty dreams
unanswered questions

Glad you liked it Dee.

Enchantress...thank you

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-10-04 12:12 PM


I took the step
and gained everything
his heart



wonderful Alan

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-10-04 07:00 AM


Alan~
This is great~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

HopeS
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6 posted 2001-10-04 07:20 AM


friends never alone
across each stepping stone
Heartbreaks get mended
By ones I befriended
Again to say "Hi
With heartstrings I tie
Hope

bonnie1961
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7 posted 2001-10-04 07:54 AM


short and sweet and very true.........
Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2001-10-04 08:46 AM


very nicely done.... nice indeed...


SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2001-10-04 09:54 AM


Very good. I like this.
The Lady of Shallot
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10 posted 2001-10-04 09:59 AM


I wish I believed this   but I am glad someone does!
Alan
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11 posted 2001-10-04 10:04 AM


The Lady of Shallot...what is so hard to believe...anything can happen if you truly want it to...

Lady In White
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12 posted 2001-10-04 10:08 AM



Very good.

Alan
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13 posted 2001-10-04 10:14 AM


thank you everyone for your comments..
Victoria
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14 posted 2001-10-04 12:16 PM


so true..sometimes that first step is the hardest...cant blame anyone but ourselves..

                 ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


Twilight Myst
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15 posted 2001-10-04 02:57 PM


  I loved this!!
sunshinemist
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16 posted 2001-10-04 03:05 PM


Alan,

Enjoyed!! ~Marie~  

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