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0 posted 2001-10-03 10:59 PM


When A Girl Falls In Love
By: Noah Eaton
9/29/01

When a girl falls in love
My heart lightens in rapture
To know that girl feels special
And she will be loved ever after

All a girl wants is to feel happy
Every girl needs to be treated with respect
Deep in their hearts they have sweet dreams meant to come true
They light our hearts everyday with love they share and bless

Every girl holds her hearts diary
Which trust and sympathy will open the keyhole
To always stand for and believe in her heart
To love a girl honestly is the greatest gift she loves of all

When a girl falls in love
My heart lights up with rejoice
Someday I want to make a girl feel special
To feel loved forever, have her heart filled with pride and joy

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-03 11:13 PM


this is oh so true - i think a lot of people miss out on this, and that is truly sad.
(i, of course, am blessed with tara.)
well stated indeed.
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2 posted 2001-10-03 11:49 PM


Too true.
Great piece.

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3 posted 2001-11-03 09:50 PM


If only every guy that a girl meets thinks like you.
We would all be in loving arms and warm embrace, loving and living happily ever after...

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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:52 PM


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Someday I want to make a girl feel special
To feel loved forever, have her heart filled with pride and joy
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Noah, I know you will. If any man can, you can!  

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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5 posted 2001-11-04 10:58 AM


Hi Noah, this is great, and you are the guy to do this..she will be happy, I assure you, when you find her.
Sandra
PS I didn't find the poem you mentioned, send me a link, ok?

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6 posted 2001-11-04 11:25 AM


Noah this was an excellent poem.It touched my heart.If more men thought like you thered be alot more happier people in the world.From what I;ve read of you writngs you show great love and great compassion.I know someday you will find the one for you and she will give you all tha you have to give in retur.(Hugs)
Peaches

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7 posted 2001-11-04 12:07 PM


You have a very good heart. I wish that all guys felt like you do.
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8 posted 2001-11-04 12:18 PM


Yep, think you're onto something here, Noah.  Your princess will come.  Relax and enjoy the parade, it's a great view.
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