Open Poetry #16 |
Corner Before Dawn |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
In the corner alone with the darkness Head lowered, arms around knees The night's near, the beginning of fear Days and nights gone by, still restless If only, a hand could reach out Just to let me know I'm allright Don't want to hear the owls anymore Even though they keep me company I dream of a dawn of love and more Amidst the swinging dance of the butterfly Or shall I not have wishes and dreams Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The was beautiful, Daniel. I detect a hint of sadness at the end or maybe a bit of uncertainty? Not sure, but I loved this. All writing comes |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I dream of a dawn of love and more" My favorite line. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ 'If only, a hand could reach out Just to let me know I'm allright' Oh, that reassuring touch ... so needed by all of us~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Daniel, we are all going to be alright! Time for another 'group hug', I see. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Daniel, Lovely expressions, so softly spoken. warm smiles, and hugs too. ~Marie~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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