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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-10-03 06:06 PM



In the early morning hours
hushed dream review
I slowly sip my coffee
and think of you

As I sit in class
My mind drifts to you
I look at my books
But only you come into view

I busy myself
with things of everyday
and still these thoughts of you
seem to find their way

I just took a test
I wondered why I got the look
He said you passed the test
But who is this

I go about dinner
and found I've made your favorite dish
if only you could join me
I silently wish

As I knock upon your door
In total silence I now await
I hear you walk across the floor
I just wonder if I will get my wish

as I cross to answer
I hope somehow it will be you
and opening the door,
I see my wish has come true


~SEA~
&
Alan


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-03-2001).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-10-03 06:10 PM


you two sing well together... nicely done...


sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-03 06:10 PM


Sea,

A very special poem for that very special someone. Enjoyed!!  

Marie

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-03 07:05 PM


Very good
Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-03 07:07 PM


Susan and Alan....I am envious...you two do the 'couple' thing very well.  Enjoyed!
~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

walker
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5 posted 2001-10-03 09:33 PM


I like the emotions presented here. Great work.
HopeS
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6 posted 2001-10-03 10:05 PM


Very good you two !!
hey Alan , your getting quite the songster.
Hope

Dee
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7 posted 2001-10-03 11:06 PM


Hey guys, this is great! Good to see you two writing together.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Alan
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right next door
8 posted 2001-10-03 11:20 PM


SEA...I want to thank you for writing with me..it was fun.

Thanks to everyone for your replies
alan

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9 posted 2001-10-10 01:48 AM


How totally perfect!
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10 posted 2002-01-05 11:11 AM


enjoy
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11 posted 2002-02-20 11:47 PM


two thumbs up! this is awesome, im sorry I missed it when you first posted it!
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