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Wishing For You...........a duet with Alan

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SEA
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with you


0 posted 10-03-2001 06:06 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


In the early morning hours
hushed dream review
I slowly sip my coffee
and think of you

As I sit in class
My mind drifts to you
I look at my books
But only you come into view

I busy myself
with things of everyday
and still these thoughts of you
seem to find their way

I just took a test
I wondered why I got the look
He said you passed the test
But who is this

I go about dinner
and found I've made your favorite dish
if only you could join me
I silently wish

As I knock upon your door
In total silence I now await
I hear you walk across the floor
I just wonder if I will get my wish

as I cross to answer
I hope somehow it will be you
and opening the door,
I see my wish has come true


~SEA~
&
Alan


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-03-2001).]

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1 posted 10-03-2001 06:10 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

you two sing well together... nicely done...

sunshinemist
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2 posted 10-03-2001 06:10 PM       View Profile for sunshinemist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sunshinemist

Sea,

A very special poem for that very special someone. Enjoyed!!  

Marie
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Deep in the heart


3 posted 10-03-2001 07:05 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Very good
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 10-03-2001 07:07 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Susan and Alan....I am envious...you two do the 'couple' thing very well.  Enjoyed!
~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

walker
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5 posted 10-03-2001 09:33 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

I like the emotions presented here. Great work.
HopeS
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6 posted 10-03-2001 10:05 PM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Very good you two !!
hey Alan , your getting quite the songster.
Hope
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7 posted 10-03-2001 11:06 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Hey guys, this is great! Good to see you two writing together.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Alan
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right next door


8 posted 10-03-2001 11:20 PM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

SEA...I want to thank you for writing with me..it was fun.

Thanks to everyone for your replies
alan
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9 posted 10-10-2001 01:48 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

How totally perfect!
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enjoy
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11 posted 02-20-2002 11:47 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

two thumbs up! this is awesome, im sorry I missed it when you first posted it!
 
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